This is very much the inverse of my Kraken list. I plan to win the squadron game early here then pummel ships. It's more upgrades than I generally prefer, but I couldn't find a way to keep what I wanted and squeeze in BCC on Radiant 7, and I didn't want a 20+ point bid. So here we are.
I like it. I don't think you need Triumphant as Nevoota has Boosted Comms and with only 2 ships it shouldn't be going off too far from the flagship. Flight commander makes sense on the Venator but again Boosted comms means you dont really need it on Nevoota. You have a lot of fighters and double flight controllers so not that many fleets will get squads through to black flak range for The Ordnance pods to be vital. External racks are a nice punch against ships and can still victimize a close in squadron if you feel the need, especially fun with LTT adding 2 more flak dice.